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Ress having her morning coffee, also on this new paper I've started using.
I think I'll color this on up as well, since I haven't produced much in the way of colored works recently.
table/chair aren't so much in proper perspective, but this isn't class, so I'm not going to worry about it lol.
Also, critique on the crossed legs? That's hard to do if you don't have a model. And I haven't draw that position before either.
I think I'll color this on up as well, since I haven't produced much in the way of colored works recently.
table/chair aren't so much in proper perspective, but this isn't class, so I'm not going to worry about it lol.
Also, critique on the crossed legs? That's hard to do if you don't have a model. And I haven't draw that position before either.
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Summary: There's not enough bulk to the upper thigh (at least not for legs that thick below the knee), and the hip needs to jut out a bit more.
Details:
There needs to be more squishing of the left thigh on top of the right one. Almost none of the right thigh should be visible, considering we're looking slightly down at it, and the left should be clearly pressured and squashed out a bit.
Also, if you look at your own leg, you'll see that when you bring your left leg over your right leg (as she does here), your pelvis will rotate, bringing your left hip joint forward a few inches. In this pic, you should see a bit of butt peeking out of the robe.
Hope that helps. If you need refs, you can always search the nudes in the stock galleries -- there's a lot of helpful poses there.
Details:
There needs to be more squishing of the left thigh on top of the right one. Almost none of the right thigh should be visible, considering we're looking slightly down at it, and the left should be clearly pressured and squashed out a bit.
Also, if you look at your own leg, you'll see that when you bring your left leg over your right leg (as she does here), your pelvis will rotate, bringing your left hip joint forward a few inches. In this pic, you should see a bit of butt peeking out of the robe.
Hope that helps. If you need refs, you can always search the nudes in the stock galleries -- there's a lot of helpful poses there.